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While all the people jumped from one service to another, Varfolomey Korotkov, a gentle, quiet blond, firmly served in the Glavtsentrbazspimat (Spimat for short) as a clerk and served in it for 11 whole months.
On September 20, 1921, the cashier Spimat covered himself with his nasty eared hat, grabbed his briefcase and left. He returned completely wet, put his hat on the table, and put his briefcase on top of the hat. Then he left the room and returned a quarter of an hour later with a large chicken. He put the chicken on the briefcase, on the chicken - his right hand and said: “There will be no money. And do not fit in, gentlemen, otherwise you, comrades, will overturn the table for me. Then he covered himself with a hat, waved a chicken and disappeared through the door.
Three days later, the salary was still issued. Korotkov received 4 large packs, 5 small and 13 boxes of Spimat's "products of production", and, having packed the "salary" in a newspaper, he left for home, and at the entrance of Spimat he almost got hit by a car in which someone drove up, but Korotkov did not see who exactly.
At home, he laid the matches on the table: “We will try to sell them,” he said with a stupid smile and knocked on the door of his neighbor, Alexandra Fedorovna, who works in the Gubvinsklad. The neighbor was squatting in front of a row of bottles of church wine, her face was tearful. “And we get matches,” said Korotkov. “But they don’t burn!” cried Alexandra Fyodorovna. "How is it that they don't burn?" Korotkov was frightened and rushed to his room.
The first match immediately went out, the second fired sparks into the left eye of comrade. Korotkov, and had to be blindfolded. Korotkov suddenly looked like a wounded man in battle.
All night Korotkov struck matches and struck out three boxes like that. His room was filled with a suffocating sulphurous smell. At dawn Korotkov fell asleep and dreamed of a living billiard ball with legs. Korotkov screamed and woke up, and for another five seconds he imagined the ball. But then everything was gone, Korotkov fell asleep and never woke up.
In the morning, Korotkov, wearing a bandage, showed up for work. On his desk, he found a paper asking for uniforms for typists. Taking the paper, Korotkov went to the head of the base, Comrade Chekushin, but at his very door he ran into an unknown person, who struck him with his appearance.
The stranger was so short that he reached Korotkov only to the waist. The lack of height was redeemed by the extreme width of the shoulders. The square body sat on twisted legs, and the left one was lame. The unknown man's head was a gigantic model of an egg, horizontally skewered around his neck, with the sharp end pointing forward. And like an egg she was bald and shiny. The tiny face of the stranger was shaved to the blue, and his green eyes, small as pinheads, sat in deep depressions. The body of the unknown person was dressed in a jacket sewn from a gray blanket, from under which a Little Russian embroidered shirt peeked out, legs in trousers made of the same material and low hussar boots from the time of Alexander I.
"What do you need?" asked the stranger in the voice of a copper basin, and it seemed to Korotkov that his words smelled of matches. “You see, do not enter without a report!”, the bald man deafened with saucepan sounds. "I'm going with a report," Korotkov went astray, pointing to his paper. The bald man suddenly got angry: “Don’t you understand?! And why do you have black eyes at every step? Well, nothing, we'll put everything in order! - he tore the paper out of Korotkov's hands and wrote a few words on it, after which the office door swallowed the unknown. Chekushin was not in the office! Lidochka, Chekushin's personal secretary (also blindfolded, injured by matches) said that Chekushin was expelled yesterday, and the bald one is now in his place.
Arriving in his room, Korotkov read the bald man's writing: "All typists and women in general will be given soldier's underpants in a timely manner." Korotkov composed a telephone message in three minutes, handed it over to the manager for signature, and for four hours after that sat in the room, so that the manager, if he decides to drop in suddenly, would certainly find him immersed in work.
Nobody ever came. At half past four the bald one left, and the office immediately fled. Comrade Korotkov went home alone later than everyone else.
The next morning, Korotkov happily threw off the bandage and immediately became prettier and changed. He was late for work, and when he nevertheless ran into the office, the entire office did not sit in their places at the kitchen tables of the former Alpine Rose restaurant, but stood in a pile against the wall, on which paper was nailed. The crowd parted, and Korotkov read "Order No. 1" about the immediate dismissal of Korotkov for negligence and for his bruised face. Under the order was the signature: "Head of the pants."
How? Is his surname Longhorn? croaked Korotkov. - And I read "Underpants" instead of "Underpants". He writes his last name with a small letter! As for the face, he has no right! I will explain!!! - he sang high and thin and rushed straight to the terrible door.
As soon as Korotkov ran up to the office, the door swung open, and Longjohn rushed along the corridor with a briefcase under his arm. Korotkov rushed after him. "You see, I'm busy! - rang the frantically striving Longhorn, - Contact the clerk! "I'm a clerk!" Korotkov squealed in horror. But Longjohn had already slipped away, jumped into a motorbike and disappeared into the smoke. "Where did he go?" Korotkov asked in a trembling voice. "Say to Tsentrsnab ..." Korotkov ran down the stairs in a whirlwind, jumped out into the street, jumped into the tram and rushed after him. Hope burned his heart.
In Tsentrsnab, he immediately saw the square back of Pantser flashing ahead on the stairs and hurried after her. But on the 5th platform, the back disappeared into the thick of people. Korotkov flew up to the landing and entered the door with two inscriptions in gold on green "Pepigneroc Dormitory" and in black on white "Nachkantsupravdelsnab". In the room, Korotkov saw glass cages and fair-haired women running between them to the unbearable rumble of cars. There was no longshort. Korotkov stopped the first woman he came across. “He is leaving now. Catch up with him,” the woman replied, waving her hand.
Korotkov ran in the direction the woman pointed to, found himself on a darkish landing and saw the open mouth of the elevator, which assumed a square back. "Comrade Longhorn!" shouted Korotkov, and his back turned. Korotkov recognized everything: both the gray jacket and the briefcase. But it was a Longshort with a long, ruffled Assyrian beard that fell over his chest. "Late, comrade, on Friday," Longjohn shouted in tenor as he was being lowered by the elevator. "The voice is also tethered," thumped in Korotkovsky's skull.
A second later, with a curse, Korotkov rushed down the stairs, where he again saw Pantser, blue-shaven and scary. He passed quite close, separated only by a glass wall. Korotkov rushed to the nearest door handle and unsuccessfully began to tear it, and only then, in despair, saw a tiny inscription: "All around, through the 6th entrance." "Where is the sixth?" Korotkov shouted weakly. In response, a luster-colored old man came out of the side door with a huge list in his hands.
Do you all go? murmured the old man. “Come on, anyway, I already crossed you out, Vasily Petrovich,” and he laughed voluptuously.
I'm Varfolomey Petrovich - said Korotkov.
Do not confuse me, - the terrible old man objected. - Kolobkov V.P. and Pantser. Both have been translated. And in place of Longhorn - Chekushin. I managed to drive all day, and they kicked me out ...
I am saved! Korotkov exclaimed jubilantly and reached into his pocket for a little book so that the old man could make a note about his reinstatement in the service, and then he turned pale, clapped his pockets and with a muffled cry rushed back up the stairs - there was no wallet with all the documents! Running up the stairs, I rushed back, but the old man had already disappeared somewhere, all the doors were locked, and in the semi-darkness of the corridor there was a slight smell of sulfur. "Tram!" groaned Korotkov. He jumped out into the street and ran into a small building of unpleasant architecture, where he began to prove to a gray man, oblique and gloomy, that he was not Kolobkov, but Korotkov, and that his documents had been stolen. Sery demanded a certificate from the brownie, and a painful dilemma opened up before Korotkov: to Spimat or to the brownie? And when he had already decided to run to Spimat, the clock struck four, dusk fell, and people with briefcases ran out of all the doors. "It's too late," thought Korotkov, "go home."
At home, a note stuck out in the ear of the castle - a neighbor left Korotkov all her wine salary. Korotkov dragged all the bottles to him, collapsed on the bed, jumped up, threw the boxes of matches on the floor, and furiously began to crush them with his feet, vaguely dreaming that he was crushing Longsoner's head. He stopped: “Well, isn’t he really a double?” Fear crept into the room through the black windows, Korotkov wept softly. He cried, ate, then cried again. He drank half a glass of wine and suffered from pain in his temples for a long time, until a cloudy dream took pity on him.
On the next morning Korotkov ran to the brownie. The brownie, as luck would have it, died, and no certificates were issued. Frustrated, Korotkov rushed off to Spimat, where Chekushin may have already returned.
In Spimat, Korotkov immediately went to the office, but stopped on the threshold and opened his mouth: not a single familiar face was in the hall of the former Alpine Rose restaurant. Korotkov went to his room, and the light faded in his eyes - Longjohn was sitting at Korotkov's table and his frilled beard covered his chest: "I'm sorry, I'm the local clerk," he answered in an astonished falsetto. Korotkov hesitated and went out into the corridor. And immediately the shaved face of Pantser blocked the world: “Good! - the pelvis slammed, and a convulsion brought Korotkov. - You are my assistant. Pantser - clerk. I’ll run off to the department, and you and Longsoner will write your attitude about all the former ones, and especially about this bastard Korotkov.
Longwinder dragged Korotkov, who was breathing heavily, into the office, crossed out on paper, slammed his seal, grabbed the receiver, yelled into it, "I'll be right there," and disappeared through the door. And Korotkov read with horror on a piece of paper: “The bearer of this is my assistant comrade V.P. Kolobkov ... "At that moment the door opened, and Longjohn returned in his beard:" Longjohn has already fled? Korotkov howled and jumped up to Longjohn, baring his teeth. The pantser fell out in horror into the corridor and rushed to run. Korotkov came to his senses and rushed after him. From the cries of Longjohn, the office was in disarray, and Longjohn himself disappeared behind the former restaurant organ. Korotkov rushed after him, but caught on to a huge organ handle - a grumbling was heard, and now all the halls were filled with a lion's roar: “The Moscow fire was noisy, thundered ...” A car signal broke through the howl and roar, and Longhorn, shaven and formidable, entered the lobby. In an ominous bluish glow, he began to climb the stairs. Korotkov's hair began to stir, he ran out into the street through the side doors and saw a bearded Long Johner jump into the cab.
Korotkov cried out painfully: "I'll explain it!" - and rushed off on a tram to a green building, asked the blue teapot in the window where the claims bureau was, and immediately got confused in the corridors and rooms. Relying on memory, Korotkov went up to the eighth floor, opened the door and entered an immense and completely empty hall with columns. A massive figure of a man in white came down heavily from the stage, introduced himself and affectionately asked Korotkov whether he would please them with a brand new feuilleton or essay. Confused Korotkov began to tell his bitter story, but then the man began to complain about "this Pantser", who, during his two days here, managed to transfer all the furniture to the claims bureau.
Korotkov screamed and flew off to the claims bureau. For about five minutes he ran, following the curves of the corridor, and ended up at the place from which he ran out. "Ah, damn!" Korotkov gasped and ran in the other direction - in five minutes he was again in the same place. Korotkov ran into the empty colonnaded hall and saw a man in white - he was standing without an ear and a nose, and his left arm was broken off. Backing away and growing cold, Korotkov again ran out into the corridor. Suddenly, a secret door opened before him, from which a shriveled woman came out with empty buckets on a yoke. Korotkov rushed through that door, found himself in a semi-dark space with no way out, began frenziedly scratching at the walls, fell on some kind of white spot, which released him onto the stairs. Korotkov ran downstairs, from where footsteps were heard. Another moment - and a gray blanket and a long beard appeared. Their eyes crossed at the same time, and both howled in thin voices of fear and pain. Korotkov stepped back up, Longjohn backed down: "Save me!" he yelled, changing his thin voice to a brassy bass. Having stumbled, he fell with a thunder, turned into a black cat with phosphorescent eyes, flew out into the street and disappeared. An unusual clearing suddenly came in Korotkov's brain: “Aha, I understand. Cats! He began to laugh louder and louder until the whole staircase was filled with booming peals.
In the evening, sitting at home on the bed, Korotkov drank three bottles of wine in order to forget everything and calm down. Now his head ached all over and twice Comrade. Korotkov vomited in the pelvis. Korotkov made up his mind to straighten out his documents and never again appear in Spimat, and not meet with the terrible Pantser. In the distance, a clock began to chime. Having counted forty blows, Korotkov smiled bitterly and burst into tears. Then he again convulsively and heavily vomited church wine.
The next day Com. Korotkov again climbed up to the eighth floor and finally found a claims bureau. There were seven women in the bureau at the typewriters. The extreme brunette abruptly interrupted Korotkov, who was about to open his mouth, dragged him out into the corridor, where she resolutely expressed her intention to give herself to Korotkov. “I don’t need it,” Korotkov replied hoarsely, “they stole my documents ...” The brunette rushed to Korotkov with a kiss, and then (“Tek-s”) a lustrin old man suddenly appeared.
You are everywhere, Mr. Kolobkov. But you can’t kiss me on a business trip - they gave me, an old man. And I'll file an application for you. Molester, are you getting to the subdivisions? Do you want to tear out the lifts from the old man's hands? he suddenly cried. Hysteria seized Korotkov, but then: "Next!" squawked the office door. Korotkov rushed into it, passed the cars and found himself in front of a graceful blond man, who nodded to Korotkov: "Poltava or Irkutsk?" Then he pulled out a drawer, and a secretary crawled out of the drawer, twisting like a snake, took a pen from his pocket and began to scribble. The brunette head popped out of the door and shouted excitedly:
I have already sent his documents to Poltava. And I'm going with him. I have an aunt in Poltava.
I don't want! cried Korotkov, his eyes wandering.
Poltava or Irkutsk? The blond growled out of himself. - Don't waste your time! Do not walk in the corridors! No smoking! Don't bother changing money!
Handshakes are cancelled! crowed the secretary.
It is said in the thirteenth commandment: do not enter without a report to your neighbor, - the lustrin mumbled and flew through the air.
Dizziness came around the room, the blond began to grow in the dregs. He waved a huge hand, the wall fell apart, the typewriters on the tables played a foxtrot, and thirty women paraded around them. White trousers with purple stripes crawled out of the cars: "The bearer of this is really the bearer, and not some kind of scammer." Korotkov whimpered thinly and began banging his head against the corner of the blond table. “Now there is only one salvation - to Dyrkin in the fifth department,” the old man whispered anxiously. - Go! I'm going!" There was a smell of ether, and hands vaguely carried Korotkov out into the corridor. Dampness smelt from the mesh going into the abyss...
The cab and two Korotkovs fell down. The first Korotkov got out, the second remained in the cockpit mirror. A pink fat man in a top hat said to Korotkov: “Here I am going to arrest you.” “You can't arrest me,” Korotkov laughed with a satanic laugh, “because I don't know who I am. Maybe I'm a Hohenzollern. Pantser did not come across? Answer me fat man!" The fat man trembled in horror: “Now to Dyrkin, not otherwise. He's just ugly!" And they ascended in the elevator to Dyrkin.
When Korotkov entered the cosily furnished office, the plump little Dyrkin jumped up from the table and barked: "M-shut up!", although Korotkov had not yet said anything. At the same moment a pale young man with a briefcase appeared in the office. Dyrkin's face was covered with smiling wrinkles, he cried out in a sweet and welcoming voice. However, the young man, in a metallic voice, gave Dyrkin a scolding, waved his briefcase, cracked it on Dyrkin's ear, and, shaking Korotkov with his red fist, went out. “Here,” said the kind and humiliated Dyrkin, “is the reward for diligence. Well... Beat Dyrkin. It hurts with your hand, so take the candelabrik. Understanding nothing, Korotkov took the candelabrum and hit Dyrkin on the head with a crunch. Dyrkin, shouting "guard", fled through the inner door. "Ku Klux Klan! - shouted the cuckoo from the clock, and turned into a bald head. - Let's write down how you beat the workers! Rage seized Korotkov, he struck the candelabra at the clock, and Longjohn jumped out of them, turned into a white cockerel and darted through the door. Immediately behind the doors came the cry of Dyrkin: “Catch him!”, And the heavy footsteps of people flew from all sides. Korotkov started to run.
They ran up a huge staircase: a fat man's top hat, a white rooster, a candelabra, Korotkov, a boy with a revolver in his hand, and some other people stomping. On the street Korotkov, overtaking the top hat and the chandelier, jumped out first and rushed down the street. Passers-by hid from him in the doorways, whistled somewhere, someone hooted, shouted "Hold it." The shots flew after Korotkov, and the snarling Korotkov strove for the eleven-story giant, overlooking the street sideways.
Korotkov ran into the mirrored vestibule, plunged into the elevator box, sat down on the sofa across from another Korotkov, and rode to the very top. Immediately, shots rang out below.
At the top Korotkov jumped out and listened. From below came a growing rumble, from the side - the sound of balls in the billiard room. Korotkov ran into the billiard room with a battle cry. A shot rang out from below. Korotkov locked the glass doors of the billiard room and armed himself with balls, and when the first head appeared near the elevator, he began shelling. In response, a machine gun howled. Glasses shattered.
Korotkov realized that the position could not be held and ran out onto the roof. "Surrender!" - vaguely reached him. Catching up the rolling balls, Korotkov jumped up to the parapet and looked down. His heart sank. He made out the bugs-people, gray figures dancing towards the entrance, and behind them a heavy toy dotted with golden heads. "Surrounded! gasped Korotkov. - Firefighters".
Leaning over the parapet, he launched three balls one after another (the bugs ran in alarm) and three more. When Korotkov bent down to pick up more shells, people poured out of the gap in the billiard room. A lustrin old man flew over them, followed by a terrible Rollerblade with a blunderbuss in his hands menacingly rolled out on rollers. "It's over!" shouted Korotkov weakly. The courage of death surged into his soul. He climbed the parapet and shouted: "Better death than disgrace!"
The pursuers were two steps away. Already Korotkov could see the outstretched hands, flames had already jumped out of Longsoner's mouth. The abyss of sunshine beckoned Korotkov, with a piercing shout of victory he jumped up and flew up to the narrow crack in the alley. Then the blood sun burst in his head with a ringing sound, and he saw absolutely nothing more.
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Ivanov squeezed his way along the narrow aisle of the reserved seat car, glanced at the ticket and at the seat he had taken. Grandmother, sitting on a neatly straightened bed, smiled guiltily: - Excuse me, son, I already ordered it myself. It's hard for me to go upstairs.
Ivanov silently threw the duffel bag on the top shelf and sat down, pushing back the edge of Grandma's bed. Another fellow traveler, a flabby fat man in an open shirt that got wet under the armpits, caught his eye and smiled readily. This one, apparently, was one of those lovers of road talk and was happy about a new person.
- Served? he asked cheerfully.
- Interesting?
The fat man did not expect a harsh tone, became embarrassed and said:
- Oh well…
“Yours are going there,” the grandmother nodded at the partition.
- Who are ours? Ivanov did not understand.
- Fired. Drink all the way. Will you drink too?
- I won't.
The lights outside the window swayed and immediately disappeared. The train picked up speed, trembling at the junctions of the track. Grandmother, squinting blindly, looked at Ivanov point-blank.
- I don’t understand something ... How old are you, son?
- Twenty.
- Why are you all gray-haired?
Ivanov got up and went to the vestibule. He smoked in the vestibule on the lid of the dustbin, put his palms to the dusty glass, trying to see what was outside the window - it was night, impenetrable darkness, movement in the dark, - clapped behind opened door toilet, he went into the toilet, threw a cigarette butt, glanced briefly in the mirror ... He leaned against the sink and began to study his face with calm surprise - with sharp cheekbones, sagging cheeks, like those of a dead man, deep wrinkles at the corners of the mouth, feverishly shining, in a painful blue eyes.
When he returned to his compartment, the neighbors were asleep. He climbed onto the top bunk and lay down on top of the blanket, his hands behind his head.
Demobilized people were walking behind a thin partition, glasses were clinking there, a detuned guitar was strumming.
- And I say: wash the ceiling with soap and report! So I say: with soap and report ...
- No, listen, but we have ...
- The term, I say, twenty minutes - time has gone!
- Listen, a young man comes to us with a “float” ...
- Wow! Ceiling! Ha ha ha!
- Well, listen, guys! With a "float", after the institute comes a young ...
- And I say: you, green salabon, are you still going to swing the rights?
– Ha-ha-ha! Soap ceiling!
Ivanov jumped off the shelf and stepped into the next compartment. Four steamed dembiles crowded around the table, closer to the aisle sat two schoolgirls, ruddy from half a glass of port wine, goggling enthusiastic eyes. A broad-shouldered guy with a tattoo under his rolled up sleeve was talking about the ceiling.
- Listen! Ivanov said quietly through clenched teeth. - At the expense of "one" - take a deep breath. On the count of two, shut up!
- What you said?
- You heard what I said. I wouldn’t yell at every corner that the bastard - maybe they won’t notice!
- What is it, he fell off the bolt?
“Guys, wait, guys,” the bespectacled man fussed, who started everything about the young man with the “float”. We are really loud.
- No, you heard - he's a bastard of me? - the guy with the tattoo tried to get up.
“Really, let's be quiet, guys,” the bespectacled man yearned. - From the train to the commandant's office ...
Ivanov was waiting for the one with the tattoo to get out from behind the table in order to dump him at the feet of the others. The girls were very disturbing, out of the corner of his eye he saw their frightened faces.
“Everything is fine, fellow countryman, we are quiet,” the bespectacled man, splashing over the edge, hastily poured a glass and handed it to Ivanov.
He grabbed it to splash in the face. He put it on the table, returned to his room and lay down, turning to the wall. Behind the partition muttered in a low voice:
- Why is he upset? Mad, right?
Let's go, Tanya.
Where are you girls. It's too early.
No, we'll go, thanks.
- I broke the whole buzz.
- Why were you holding me? Would have broken in, and calmed down.
- Yes, well, him. Have you seen his eyes? Exactly - shifted ...
Ivanov tossed and turned, knocking over the blanket, toiled, floated in the hot, stifling air. I could not stand it, again took out a crumpled pack of "Astra", went to smoke. In the vestibule were demobilized - all four. They turned around at once, froze, apparently expecting him to retreat or begin to explain himself, but Ivanov silently squeezed his way to the window, lit a cigarette, looking through the dusty glass at the four behind him. They were whispering from behind, the bespectacled man was desperately waving his hand: come on, don't get involved.
“Hey, fellow countryman,” the broad-shouldered man called out.
Ivanov turned sharply, resting his eyes on him with a cold, heavy look. There was a pause for a moment, a silent scene - one word, and a fight would have begun.
“All right, live for now,” the broad-shouldered man muttered, threw away his cigarette and went into the car. The rest followed.
Ivanov pulled down the window, exposed his face to the cold, dense wind.
And again he lay with his head buried in the pillow, his head in his hands. The car swayed, as if walking along an embankment ...
... steps were approaching, someone scratched at the door.
- Who's there? mother sang joyfully. She glanced quickly in the mirror, adjusted her new elegant dress.
- It's me - a terrible wolf!
Olezhka, a plump-cheeked boy with a small gray strand in a forelock, stared frightened at the door.
- I'm going! I came! - the door swung open, a man in a cardboard wolf mask growled and moved towards Olezhka, holding out his hands with twisted fingers.
Olezhka, numb with horror, pressed his back against the wall.
Alla, the older sister, pushed the peasant away, shielding her brother with her back.
“Well, that’s enough, that’s enough…” said the mother with a hesitant smile.
The man chuckled under the mask.
- A healthy kid is afraid of a wolf! Let him grow up as a man! Woo! He held out his hands again. Olezhka closed his eyes, desperately fighting off the paws of the wolves...
... conductor last time shook him by the shoulder.
“Sleep at home, soldier!”
They were already standing in the aisle with their suitcases, outside the window in the gray morning light houses were floating.
Ivanov stepped onto the platform and moved in the crowd towards the station, giving way to porters with rumbling iron carts.
He walked at random along the Arbat lanes, which were not yet awake, gray and not crowded. At the entrances, with two wheels on the sidewalk, stood a line of cars. Breathing noisily, a wiry old man in red sports shorts and a cap with a long visor ran past.
Ivanov rang for a long time at the door in the old dark staircase with steep spans. Finally, light footsteps were heard in the apartment.
- Who's there?
The door slightly opened on a chain, Alla stood barefoot, holding a dressing gown on her chest.
- You don't know, do you?
- Olezhka! You?
- Can I come in?
- He's back! - Alla opened the door, grabbed him by the neck. Why didn't you send a telegram?
“I didn’t have time,” Ivanov looked blankly behind her back.
“I would have called at least from the station ...” Alla pulled away, quickly looking eagerly at her brother. “Wait, you’re completely gray-haired!”
- Not really. A little.
- Olezhka! Lord, I'm glad! Well, what are you, some kind of lifeless! I thought you would come in a crowd, with songs ... Come on! Like a funeral. You never knew how to rejoice, you can’t squeeze out a smile ... Okay, you wash yourself, but for now I’ll think of something.
She turned on the water in the bathroom. Ivanov threw the duffel bag into the corner, hung the tunic next to his sister's jackets, looked into the huge kitchen through two windows.
- Are you filming?
- No. This is my apartment.
- They did it quickly. From Intourist?
- Yeah. From Intourist.
- Haven't you got married yet?
- Where to hurry? For the first time I live in my house, - Alla appeared from the room, stretched sweetly, predatory. - My house! I don't want anyone! I will live alone!
In the bathroom, a mirror was mounted in the full height of the door. And again, as in a train - a face, Ivanov looked at his body with calm surprise, a skeleton covered with dark old man's skin. There seemed to be no muscles left on the bones, the hands were exorbitantly wide ...
... - If the bones were intact, and the meat would grow, - said the doctor. “Get dressed.” He walked over to the table. “In ten years, you will be jogging to save your waist.” Eat more, don't get too cold…” He began to fill in the medical history.
Ivanov slowly pulled on his hospital pajamas.
“And don’t blame yourself,” the doctor said, not looking up from his work. - You are not the Lord God ... Remained alive - you have to live. One hundred percent, you understand? ..
Did you drown there?
Ivanov opened his eyes with difficulty - he was lying in the bath, neck-deep in thick sparkling foam - he answered hoarsely:
- Let's get active. I have to work in an hour.
When Ivanov came out of the bathroom on wadded legs, Alla was already in a tight black dress, black shoes with pointed heels, tinted and imperceptibly changed, not like herself in the morning - something doll-like appeared in her face.
- Doesn't press at the knees? she asked mockingly, pointing to the oversized army shorts. - Sorry, I don’t keep men’s underwear, so for now you can walk around in these Bermuda shorts. Here are jeans - we seem to be the same size. T-shirt. Take any jacket...
Ivanov ate listlessly in the kitchen, Alla sat opposite, propping her cheek with a small fist.
- Why are you gray-haired, brother?
- It happened.
- You have always been very clear: yes, no, none of your business ... Will you go to Kaluga?
- Tomorrow morning. We need to get a passport.
- To the mother ... will you go? ..
- I don't have a mother. And it wasn't.
Allah was silent.
- I just escaped once ... Cleaned up a little. We still need to order a monument, land for flowers ...
“Listen,” Ivanov said sharply. "I don't care what's going on in there!" I don't care about this woman, you know? While she was alive, and now even more so!
- I thought you would change in the army ... - Alla said sadly, - Okay, I have to go. You will go out - do not forget the key - she went to the door. I'll call the guys in the evening.
- No one is needed.
“Yes, to hell with you, really!” You can sit in the corner. And I have a holiday - my brother returned from the army!
Left alone, Ivanov went into the room, sat down in the corner of the sofa, protected by the walls of this old house from other people's views, from the whole world ...
…but then the creaky door opened a crack.
- You're hiding in vain, Rooster! Malek said with a sly grin.
Oleg, a round-faced fifth-grader with a wide strand of gray in his hair, shuddered in his hiding place at the back door under the stairs, looked around in a haunted manner.
"You're going back to the bedroom anyway." You'll get it there! - Malek happily bared his sharp rat teeth and disappeared.
Immediately the door swung open again, tenth graders appeared with cigarettes.
- Get your feet up, Rooster!
Oleg obediently got up ...
Ivanov put on army boots, absurd under fashionable washed jeans, and left the house.
There were fewer cars at the entrances, but the lanes were crowded. For two years, day after day in the barracks, Ivanov saw the same faces, and now he felt restless in a motley crowd of passers-by who did not know and almost did not notice each other. A flat black ZIL silently drove up to the house with huge windows, the entire width of the facade, a general came out of it, Ivanov stopped and automatically saluted. He immediately withdrew his hand from his temple. The general walked past, barely looking at him.
Ivanov rode the subway, squeezed by someone's backs, shoulders, elbows, then walked down the street, looking at the numbers of houses. I found the right one, stood for a moment, feeling my heart beating wildly, and doomedly stepped into the entrance.
- Young man, who are you? the watchman stopped him, raising her head from her book.
- I? .. - Ivanov shuddered, as if from a shout, - I ... to the Zavyalovs ...
Are they waiting for you? The janitor eyed him suspiciously.
- I ... from my son ...
Did you serve with Sasha? The janitor covered her mouth with her hand and shook her head. - At home they ... The sixth floor ...
On the sixth floor, Ivanov approached the apartment. He raised his hand to the bell and immediately lowered it, catching his breath. He listened to the silence outside the door, looked back at the neighboring doors. He leaned his hand on the wall, putting his finger on the bell button ... Suddenly, the elevator hummed, falling through, and Ivanov rushed down the stairs, ran past the watchman and quickly walked along the sidewalk, bumping into people and not noticing them, running across the streets flowing into the avenue. He entered his sister's apartment and hurriedly slammed the door, as if escaping from the chase. He sat down at the table with his shoulders slumped.
The phone rang, Ivanov grabbed the receiver:
- Listen, Private Ivanov!
Allah laughed.
- Comrade ordinary! I order you to step into the outfit in the kitchen, boil potatoes! Potatoes under the sink. How did you understand? - A loud laugh was heard in the receiver.
Ivanov sat down in the kitchen, pulling a box of potatoes and a trash can towards him. A ribbon of potato peel quickly ran from under the knife ...
- Stars again. Planets. Galaxies.
“You see, infinity is not necessarily a straight line. - Alexander grabbed a potato ribbon from under Ivanov's knife, folded it with dirty, swollen fingers into a Mobius ribbon. – Here, look: a model of the Universe. Closed space…
They sat together in the middle of the vegetable shop in the kitchen, under a lone yellow light bulb, next to a zinc box with frozen potatoes, bent head to head over a mountain of dirty husks, in hebashkas with rolled up sleeves.
- Do you believe in your death? So that without a trace, as if it had never been?
Alexander thoughtfully shrugged his shoulders, threw the potato into a pot of water, and took a new one.
- There is a book, memories of people who were returned from clinical death. Different people, different faiths, but the memory is one: a black tunnel, a light at the end of the tunnel, bright, unearthly, and those who died before you meet ...
“So there is something—there?”
“I think an endless afterlife is last moment dying brain,” Alexander said slowly. - Or maybe death is a transition to a four-dimensional space, where the fourth dimension is time. After all, we do not live in time, it exists for us only in this moment, and then it becomes the past, where we cannot return ...
The bell rang in the hallway. Muffled voices, soft laughter, could be heard from behind the door. Ivanov clicked the lock, the “Farewell of the Slav” suddenly burst out, and a cheerful company burst into the corridor. Allah threw herself on his neck.
- Squirrel, set aside! - ordered a freckled thick guy with a tape recorder on his shoulder. He turned off the march. - Squad - line up!
They lined up in front of Ivanov - three guys and three girls.
- Laughter in the ranks! Blossomed, hay-straw, lip cries for you! Attention! - The guy turned to Ivanov, looked around in surprise, opened the door to the bathroom and looked in.
- What did you lose?
- I do not see the hero of the occasion!
- Yes, right in front of you!
- I do not see!
– What do you not see?
“I don’t see sparkling epaulettes!”
Alla threw a tunic over her brother's shoulders.
“Another thing,” the freckled man cleared his throat into his fist and solemnly began. - Private Petukhov!
My last name is Ivanov.
“Sorry,” he looked inquiringly at Alla. “I thought you had a brother.
- Native ... Just different surnames.
- So. I don't understand, but still. Private Ivanov, I congratulate you on your safe arrival from the valiant ranks. Soviet army! Hooray! - he turned on the march, the guys took the bottles of champagne “on guard”, the corks slammed randomly, Alla was already running with wine glasses, foam poured onto the floor, Ivanov shook hands: freckled - Vladik, Irina, Olga, Tolik, Lesha. Everyone sat down in the room at the coffee table, the guys got alcohol out of their bags, the girls brought snacks from the kitchen.
After a stormy start with "Farewell of the Slav", there was an awkward pause.
- How is the service? Vlad asked.
Ivanov looked at him hostilely.
"Very different," he finally answered. - Didn't you serve?
“I had no honor,” he laughed.
Alla sat down last, raised her glass:
- Well ... for the only man present here! She winked at her brother.
- Allow me! - Vladik shouted indignantly, - I protest and am ready to prove it!
- I, as an incorrigible provincial, believe that a man should, if not go to war, then at least try on military uniform!
- Of course, you are wrong, Belka, but nevertheless, I am ready to drink all evening for your ordinary, but outstanding brother. Oleg!
Ivanov drank along with everyone else.
- Champagne - for the girls, and we ... - Vladik poured vodka into large glasses.
- Eat more, bro. Irisha, give it to him.
Little Irina with a short black haircut readily smiled at Ivanov and began filling his plate.
- Well, welcome!
We drank again.
- What, right, disgusting, - Vladik grimaced. - Bayonet to the ground - what's next? he asked, lighting a cigarette.
- Leave me alone, let him rest, - said Alla.
“The Faculty of History,” Ivanov answered.
- Why the history department? Vlad was surprised.
- I decided so.
As you can see, my brother is very talkative. You just won't stop...
“There is a huge competition at the history department,” Lesha shrugged. – Wait… Vladik, but Parfyonov…
“This is an option,” Vladik perked up. It makes sense to call.
"You don't have to call," Ivanov said.
“This has nothing to do with you. Just to know the situation...
- If I find out that someone called someone, I will immediately take the documents.
“No need, Vladik,” Alla said.
- Sorry, old man, in my opinion this is not the case when you need to show integrity ... Free will, of course ...
“Why are you so twitchy,” Tolik leaned towards Ivanov. - Forget it, like a nightmare. Get drunk, sleep and forget, - he poured vodka.
Ivanov drank without waiting for the toast. Allah looked at him anxiously.
- Did not have the honor - is this humor? Ivanov asked loudly.
There was silence at the table, everyone turned to him - the conversation had been about something else for a long time, and no one understood what it was about.
“Why were you and you and none of you in the army?”
- In general, I checked in at the training camp, - Vladik smiled. “Well, you see, old man… seriously, I think that everyone should mind their own business,” he said slowly, carefully. - I graduated from the institute and graduate school, and ... Old man, - he raised his palms up, - if you think that I'm wrong ...
“So there are first-class people and second-class people?”
Alla lowered her head, the rest quickly, askance looked at each other, like doctors with a sick person: a difficult case.
Ivanov felt that everything, the limit, he stood up in tense silence, pushed the table, went out into the dark corridor, stumbling over someone's shoes and bags, pulled the lock and ran down the stairs. Fell out into the night courtyard, punched the emery trunk of a poplar tree, more, more, with all his might to feel the pain. Swaying, sobbing loudly, he went to the bench, sat down, clutching the seat with both hands.
Alla approached quietly, sat down beside him.
- What happened, Olezhka?
Alexander is dead.
- Lord, when? Why?
“You see…he died, but I’m alive…with you here…”
- What did he die of?
- After…
Alla hugged him, pressed her cheek to his shoulder.
- Disperse them?
Ivanov nodded.
"Just don't go anywhere, okay?" Stay here, they won't see you. I'll be right back. Just don't leave, okay?
She hid in the hallway. After a while, Vladik came out, followed by the others, they walked through the yard, talking in low voices. Ivanov heard his sister's voice: "I didn't know myself..."
Allah has returned
“Let’s go home,” she led to the house ...
Ivanov lay in bed, staring at the ceiling, at the squares of light from the street lamp. He held his breath, tightly closed his eyes, but the tears did not end.
Alla closed the door of the room, quickly took off her dressing gown and lay down next to her, wrapped in her blanket.
“I didn’t know him at all,” she said softly. “Just what you wrote.
She reached out, touched his face, ran it through his hair.
You are not alone, there are two of us...
In the morning, Ivanov, already in uniform, tiptoed into the room, looked at his sleeping sister, put a note on the table: "I'm in Kaluga" - and quietly closed the door.
The big-nosed girl, glancing coquettishly at Ivanov, quickly filled out the paperwork and returned the military ID.
- And that's all? .. - Ivanov was surprised.
- And what else? the girl laughed. - For a passport to the police. Been there since four today.
Ivanov went out of the small yellow building of the draft board to a quiet street. He glanced at his watch and slowly moved wherever his eyes looked. After the pandemonium of the Moscow streets, Kaluga seemed sleepy and deserted.
He bought cigarettes at a kiosk, lit a cigarette, and crossed the road to an old red-brick school with white pillars on the porch. He stood looking at the windows of his school and wandered down to the river. Behind suddenly, like a shot, struck school bell Ivanov shuddered and looked around. Immediately the front door slammed shut, a noisy crowd poured into the street ...
...boys and girls in the same blue uniform.
- And the Rooster soaped himself again to his mother! Malek yelled.
- Hold him! Convoy! - the forelocked Karaban and the red-haired Motya grabbed Oleg, twisted his arms behind his back and solemnly led him down the street. The Fat Elephant pushed from behind, Malek ran ahead and shouted: - Attention, attention! A particularly dangerous criminal has been caught!
Girls classmates, giggling, parted, skipping the procession, passers-by looked around disapprovingly.
There were no passers-by on the narrow unpaved street, sandwiched between the fences of private houses, the game became boring, and Oleg was released. Malek, who ran in from behind, pushed him with all his might in the back, Oleg fell face down into the frozen mud, got up, holding his dirty hands up, looking in confusion at the soiled uniform.
Then the nanny Natasha fiercely scraped the dirt from his trousers. Oleg stood nearby in shorts and boots.
No shame, no conscience. Of course - not my own, so you can spoil ... Wow, I would have given it! - she waved her trousers at Oleg. - Get out of sight!
She kicked Oleg out into the corridor. Then Slon and Motya picked him up and, choking with laughter, pushed him into the girl's bedroom. The girls squealed and turned away, then rushed to pinch and beat him with slippers and pillows. Oleg, covering himself with his hands, sobbing, rushed out of the room, but Elephant and Motya firmly held the door from the outside ...
Ivanov slowly approached an old two-story building along a narrow, unpaved street. orphanage, threw a cigarette into the urn and pushed the heavy door. Long corridors stretched on both sides of the vestibule, a staircase led to the second floor with wooden blocks stuffed on the railing so that they would not ride on horseback, from somewhere came the stomping and many-voiced hubbub, a little boy ran down the stairs, froze, looking at the unfamiliar soldier with wary curiosity: - Uncle, who are you to?
Ivanov did not answer, he looked into the mysterious depth of the corridors, from where ...
... there was a joyful cry: “New ones!” Soon he and Belka were already standing in the middle of the noisy crowd, they were asked about something, crowded, the back ones rose on tiptoe. Oleg shook his head in confusion, Belka held his hand tightly.
Then Oleg, in his shorts, stood in front of the doctor.
- Nothing hurts?
“That's good,” the doctor for some reason examined his hair and turned to the papers on the table. - Call your sister.
Oleg went out into the corridor, tucking his shirt into his trousers. On the other side of the door, where the loose hinges had come loose from the jamb, two older boys peered through the crack.
“Nice chick,” one said.
- Let me ... let ...
- Why are you peeking? Oleg said.
“Back off,” one of the guys pushed him away.
- Akaki! another whispered, and they both jumped away from the door.
A teacher in glasses, thin and long, approached, smiled reassuringly, took Oleg by the hand and led him down the corridor. In the bedroom he sat down on the bed. A homing crowd of boys followed, and sat down opposite.
- Meet our newcomer, Oleg Petukhov. My name is Arkady Yakovlevich. Here you will sleep, here is your bedside table. The guys will show you the toilet and washbasin. I think you will make friends. Everything will be fine.” He smiled again and ruffled his hair. - I'll have to trim a little.
Akakich left, and Oleg was left alone under curious glances.
- Hey, how are you ... Petukhov, - the blond, fat Elephant, lounging on the bed by the window, squinting, looked at him. – How did you get here? Are there ancestors?
- My mother went on a business trip.
- Oh, hold me! the sharp-nosed, fidgety Malek laughed. - His mother went on a business trip! Your mommy brought you here, and now she will catch the man herself!
- Not true. Why do you say that, - Oleg was surprised. When she returns, she will pick me up.
- Oh, I can't! Malek collapsed onto the bed and kicked his legs. - Our mother will come, she will bring us milk, she will take Petukhov!
“Malek, don’t fuss,” the Elephant commanded. - And you, Rooster, bring water. I want to drink something ... Motya, show me.
Motya put a glass in Oleg's hand and nodded:
- Come on, I'll show you the sink.
At night, lying on a narrow, creaky bed with a purple ink stamp on the pillowcase, in the middle of a large dark room, where eight more of the same beds stood right next to each other, identical school jackets hung on a hanger, and identical black shoes lined up under them, Oleg quietly began to cry, buried in a pillow.
- Who breeds dampness there? – the Elephant asked with displeasure.
“It was the Rooster who remembered his mother,” Malek immediately responded. He rolled the sheet over himself, tied a towel around his head, and, swinging his hips, walked around the bedroom. Muffled laughter was heard from all sides, “Olezhechka!” Synulik! It's me, your mom! I'm already back! Where are you, my sweetie? - he went from bed to bed, looking into the faces of the laughing guys. - Not him ... And it's not him. Fu, what nasty faces! Ah, there you are! He began stroking Oleg on the head. Don't cry, I brought you candy. Come on, eat! - and Malek began to stuff a crumpled candy wrapper into Oleg's mouth.
Oleg, choking with tears, buried his head under the pillow ...
In the morning in the dining room, the Elephant took his compote.
“This is my glass,” Oleg said in confusion.
- You'll get over. Mommy will buy you a hundred thousand compotes when she returns, - answered the Elephant ...
At the door of the dining room, Oleg waited for Belka. She went out with classmates.
- Well, how are you, Olezhka?
Oleg smiled sadly.
“They say that mother will never come back for us.
- Don't you listen. We know with you.
Is that it, brother? - asked the curly beauty Lyubanya, - It grows in the frame! - she grabbed Oleg with two fingers by the nose, - When you grow up, we'll get married! Take me?
Oleg nodded in confusion. The girls laughed and walked on.
In the bedroom, when classmates, already in uniform and with briefcases, arranged a heap-mala at the door, the Elephant said to him:
Take my briefcase.
– What is it? - Oleg was taken aback.
But the Elephant has already left. The briefcase was on his bed. Oleg looked at him hesitantly, rushed after the guys, then returned, took the briefcase and ran to catch up with the Elephant.
He on the move impudently flirted with Lyubanya. Lyubanya condescendingly looked down at him: the Elephant barely reached her shoulder, and next to him, Lyubanya looked like a completely adult woman. Oleg was about to catch up with them, but, in fact, there was no point in getting into a conversation - and he trudged along behind with two briefcases ...
In the evening, Oleg, having laid out a textbook on the bedside table, diligently wrote in a notebook. The elephant sat on his bed, looking thoughtfully at the mud-stained shoes, then ordered: - Rooster, here!
- Come here, I say!
Oleg approached, stopped in front of him.
- Get a brush.
Oleg handed him a shoe brush.
- Let's! The elephant stretched its legs.
- Are you stunned? Oleg smiled in surprise.
Come on, don't pull the cat's tail.
“Why should I shine your shoes?” Clean yourself.
- Motya, look there ... - The elephant slowly got up.
Motya looked out into the corridor and tightly closed the door. Oleg looked around in confusion: some watched with interest, others averted their eyes.
- You will not? - Smiling, asked the Elephant.
“I won’t,” Oleg put down the brush.
The elephant, smiling, hit him in the face. Oleg staggered, threw up his hands in defense.
- More? - Smiling, asked the Elephant.
“Come on, come on,” Malek helpfully put the brush into Oleg’s hand. - Well, that's it, that's it...
And Oleg, sitting down, growing cold with shame and fear, in deathly silence began to clean the shoes of the smiling Elephant ...
Along the snow-covered street, bent over, Oleg dragged five briefcases: two in his hand and one under his arm. Elephant with the company, embracing, walked ahead. The children from the orphanage stretched out all over the street, played snowballs, jostled merrily...
In Oleg's class, having lost weight and losing his blush, he nodded sleepily. Teacher Marina Pavlovna, young, beautiful, with dimples on her cheeks, passing by his desk, affectionately patted him on the top of his head. Immediately behind her, the Elephant, who was sitting behind her, smashed his fist in the same place with a flourish. Oleg's neighbor, the burly Seryozha Novgorodsky, knitting his eyebrows, looked back at him, then at Oleg: - What are you doing, Rooster! he whispered. - What are you putting up with? Yes, I would break his face for it! What are you afraid of? Let's go together. And if he gets frisky, I'll gather the guys from the street, well?
Oleg cringed, looked back frightened: did the Elephant hear?
- Don't, Sereg... That's how we are... I'm not offended...
– Nu and figs with you. Six like a broom. And don’t poke your nose at me anymore, I don’t talk to sixes! - Novgorodsky settled down on the edge of the desk ...
At recess, Squirrel came down to the kid's corridor.
- How are you, Olezhka?
- Will mom be here soon?
- After the New Year.
Oleg threw shocked eyes at his sister:
“You said soon!
- She can’t yet, Olezhka ...
An Elephant crept up at point-blank range and stuck chewed paper from a ruler into Oleg's cheek. Alla grabbed him by the forelock.
“Well, you, washcloth ...” the Elephant gritted, retreating.
Malek at this time crept up behind and pulled up her skirt.
The squirrel sat down, slammed her skirt and turned to Malk, the Elephant immediately kicked her in the ass, they all flew in at once, Alla went away from them, then ran, Motya whistled after her, Malek yelled: - And the panties are blue!
And everyone got it:
- Blue! Blue!
Oleg stood with his head bowed, almost crying from shame and impotence ...
Then there was a control, Oleg sat alone - Novgorodsky moved to another desk - and hastily solved examples on a piece of paper.
“Come on, hurry up,” the Elephant shoved him in the back.
Oleg handed him the solutions, and Karaban was already holding out his version from the next row.
The bell rang, Oleg feverishly wrote in his notebook.
- All. All. We rent! - Marina Pavlovna hurried. - Oleg!..
After school, she sat in an empty classroom, her hand on the head of Oleg standing next to her. Immediately, Akakich hunched guiltily.
- I don’t understand what is happening, - Marina Pavlovna said, - It’s getting worse and worse, from two to three. Today again: out of four examples, one solved.
“What is the matter with you, Oleg?.. After all, he was an excellent student at that school,” he explained to the teacher. - Maybe the guys offend you?
Oleg saw that the vigilant Malek was looking through the crack in the door, he mumbled a little audibly:
Near the pharmacy, Malek stopped and handed Oleg a prescription and some change.
- What about yourself? Oleg asked.
“They already know me here. Let's!
Oleg went to the pharmacy, knocked out a check at the checkout. Malek watched him through the window. Oleg hesitantly filed a check with a prescription through the window. The apothecary took the prescription, raised her eyebrows, and looked at the boy, cowering in front of her. She hesitated, but still laid out two packs of medicine.
Malek stuffed them into his pocket, giggling happily.
- And why do you need it? Oleg asked.
- You are a fool, Rooster! Malek laughed. - It's from the gonorrhea! I'll sell it to the girls from the seventh for a gold piece! .. Just don't tell the Elephant, understand? Take away, bastard ...
They quickly walked along the frosty evening street, in a crowd of people hurrying home.
- Lesh, why are you at the base? Oleg asked. You don't have anyone, do you?
- No, my mother left me in the hospital. I had a hare lip, I thought - a freak was born. And then I had an operation. You see, the scar, - he lifted his upper lip. - Unnoticeable, right?
“She will find you later anyway,” Oleg said with conviction.
- No, if they take from us, then quite small fry. If they didn’t take you to school, then that’s it ... What do you really think - your mother will pick you up? You are a fool, Rooster! We only have Moti no one, the rest of all have.
The famous prose writer and screenwriter Yuri Korotkov is the author of the popular stories "Azaria", "Willis", "Aboriginal", "Wild Love". The children of the 1st grade and I turned to Yu. Korotkov's story "Grey", published in the magazine "We" (No. 7, 1993), quite by accident.
Having familiarized ourselves with the approximate topics of graduation essays, we decided to try our hand, in particular, in reviewing the materials of Literaturnaya Gazeta and youth magazines. They borrowed magazines from the library. Youth", "The same age", "We". And those who worked with the magazine "We" opened for us the story of Y. Korotkov "Grey". They all read it with great interest.
In order for the lesson to take the form of a dispute, preliminary work was needed: to achieve mandatory knowledge of the text by each student, to prepare questions. Questions in a strong class can be brought immediately to the lesson, in a weak one - hang out in advance:
1. What and who is this story about?
2. What is right and wrong main character story by Oleg Petukhov-Ivanov:
from the 1st orphanage;
b) in the army;
V) in the house (relationship with sister, attitude to mother, to friends)?
3. What does the orphanage teacher Akakich accuse Oleg of? Do you agree with him? And how does the hero of the story understand this?
4. Who is right and which side are you on? (Work on the passage on "not resisting evil with violence".)
5. Has the character changed by the end of the story, and in what direction?
6. What do you consider the most important thing for you in this story? Your personal attitude to the hero and the events described in the story.
The lesson went well. The conversation turned out to be great, heated debate flared up around many of the details described in the story.
What is this story about? Why did she excite me?
I think because it is about us, about our time, about a guy who is a little older than us, about his difficult childhood and, finally, about serving in the army, where hazing reigns, breaking the fate of young people. And yet, in the words of the hero of the story, that "... the main thing is to save your soul, not to brutalize ... As long as your soul has not become embittered, it means that evil has not yet won ..."
And how not to become embittered, how not to let evil into your soul when there is evil around you? Evil from childhood... When a mother sends her two children to an orphanage in order to arrange her life, to get married. This little boy Oleg Petukhov cannot understand in any way: "It's not true! You're lying, she's back, she's going to look for me. I'll tell her everything about you, everything, she'll show you!"
It's incredible, how can you not be angry at the whole world little man. Humiliated, offended, beaten by classmates who forced him to play the role of "six": clean shoes, make the bed, carry five briefcases, decide for them test papers, and to learn "... it's getting worse and worse, from a deuce to a triple" to learn. This, in my opinion, is beyond human vultures.
Yes, no matter how hard and insulting it was, Oleg almost resigned himself to his position, almost gave up ("Don't, Sereg ... This is how we are ... I'm not offended ...")
In my opinion, this "almost" is some kind of hope that his mother will come for him and his sister, that she will find him. After another unsuccessful escape to the mother, "... the gray strand in the hair became wider, captured the forelock and temple", "the eyes looked calm and despondent." There was some kind of fracture in Oleg's soul. He resists, fights, fights for his freedom, independence, for the honor of his sister Belka: "I'll kill! I'll kill everyone!".
Oleg is right that he starts to fight, but (this is exactly what I see main idea author) he is deeply wrong in that he turned away, did not help the one in trouble, lives on his own, for himself ...
Yes, this idea is emphasized twice in the story: the first time in the orphanage, and then in the army, when Oleg "... washed the pipes", when Sergeant Liukin sends the soldier Chebotar to the barracks for his "demobilization" album in a snowstorm, and Chebotar dies. And Oleg turns away: "I would not go." Again, only for myself.
And he is very cruel to his mother. Can't forgive her orphanage.
(There are disputes, polar opinions, and it is important for the teacher to draw a conclusion himself.)
Completely agree with Akaki. You can't be like Oleg.
Well, why didn't this adult man, clever Akakich, come to Oleg and others to help?
Is it possible to help children in this situation at all? Protect them from the "elephants" in the orphanage? From "grandfathers" in the army? Maybe you really need to fight for yourself?
In my opinion, Alexander, the "marshal's son", who left the university, played a big role in the fate of Oleg, because "daddy" "shoved" him there.
(It's appropriate here. expressive reading excerpts from the story: from "Gophers will be brought soon" to "I plowed mine, I'll get mine!" p. 68, from "Listen, Oleg ..." to "You are more to blame than this half-wit Liukin .;." pp. 82, from "Not resisting evil..." to "This is such a tale" pp. 79-80.)
The teacher, listening to the opinion of the children, helps to understand the behavior of the characters, to see them life position, there is pi "inside the rod" and what is it like, is it rotten. Is it possible to justify or condemn Oleg? It is appropriate to recall the biblical one: "Judge not, lest you be judged."
Let's go back to the text. They read the hero’s answer to this question and decided to write it down in their notebooks: “Whatever happens, no matter how painful it is, just don’t let evil into your soul. Even if it conquers the whole world, as long as your soul exists, where it has no way, evil has not yet won!”
Apparently, the death of Alexander, his conversations with Oleg did their job, and, I think, the hero changed in better side, realized he was wrong, because at the end of the story the author sends him to the grave of his mother, whom he had once abandoned.
We must remain human, that is, we need to look at ourselves through the eyes of Alexander (another hero of the story) and decide: if there is something from Opeg in us, then it is better to try to get rid of it faster, because sooner or later everyone will do it. So it's better - earlier.
Maybe I've given the approximate answers of the guys in too much detail, but I got great satisfaction from this lesson. And, as a result, a student of my class final exam, having chosen the topic "My favorite magazine", she showed an excellent experience of reviewing the magazine "We" and independently analyzed the story by Y. Korotkov "Grey". It was the work of a contender for a medal. She took a risk.
Clara GAYSINA
In 1980 he graduated from the Literary Institute. Gorky, where he was his mentor. Yuri Korotkov - Dancing ghosts. The book "Accident, the daughter of a cop" Yuri Korotkov. The film, released in the early 90s, in its "Accident, the daughter of a cop", "Wild Love", "Grey" - action-packed, Content Briefly, dryly, completely uninteresting and absolutely not touching.
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Accident, the daughter of a cop - Yuri Korotkov. In comparison with the film, this little story, of course, pales. I would even say that the book is a somewhat extended, but accurate script. I would not separate them, because without visualization, Korotkov's characters are not half as colorful.
And the situation is not so gloomy, and the situation does not look so tragic. You just need to imagine this perestroika twilight, and this strange couple - a lost and sickly orphan girl from a special boarding school and a boy from a wealthy family. This novel is the only bright flash in Masha's life, but what is this relationship for Maxim? He feels sorry for Masha and loves her in his own way, but he is also ashamed and will never introduce his friends and classmates. We do not know what happened to her, but it is obvious that it was some kind of painful experience that broke and reshaped her. You can’t see this in the book, but Ksenia Kachalina played perfectly - her thin and nervous Masha with those whirlpool eyes and some kind of uncertain smile, as if her owner is expecting a kick or a crack, scares rather than causes pity.
Masha is not a sheep, there is something hidden, dangerous and threatening in her. For Masha, the meaning of life, of course, lies in Maxim's love, it is this love that helps her to somehow glue the internal faults and gradually get back on her feet. Unfortunately, an enthusiastic, prosperous Sue comes from America to study, who also really likes this mysterious handsome man, and in order to charm Maxim, Sue has a lot of assets - dad at Microsoft, money, an offer to study at a private college, complacency bordering on idiocy.
History repeats itself, but now it is not Sue who chooses, and, perhaps, she is just an auxiliary link here, which Maxim is going to use for his career. What about Masha? Masha will only have to look out the murky window at the rotten domestic autumn, and realize that she has once again been abandoned, used, that there is an obstacle that can and should be removed.
It is not difficult to guess how this story will end. Nothing good. Is anyone sorry? No, not Maxim, who betrayed, not Sue, who never understood anything, and not Masha, who nevertheless smiled, because she won back her only valuable asset. A dark, dark, sad story. Simple, but piercing.
There are many signs of the time that do not amuse and do not inspire any nostalgia, but you want to howl from them and fly away yourself somewhere to a well-fed and bright foreign country, because there is only darkness behind you. Love is a disease, love is an obsession, love is a wormhole.
Ivanov squeezed his way along the narrow aisle of the reserved seat car, glanced at the ticket and at the seat he had taken. Grandmother, sitting on a neatly straightened bed, smiled guiltily:
Excuse me, son, I already ordered it myself. It's hard for me to go upstairs.
Ivanov silently threw the duffel bag on the top shelf and sat down, pushing back the edge of Grandma's bed. Another fellow traveler, a flabby fat man in an open shirt that got wet under the armpits, caught his eye and smiled readily. This one, apparently, was one of those lovers of road talk and was happy about a new person.
Served? he asked cheerfully.
Interesting?
The fat man did not expect a harsh tone, became embarrassed and said:
Yours are going there, - the grandmother nodded at the partition.
Who are ours? Ivanov did not understand.
Dismissed. Drink all the way. Will you drink too?
I won't.
The lights outside the window swayed and immediately disappeared. The train picked up speed, trembling at the junctions of the track. Grandmother, squinting blindly, looked at Ivanov point-blank.
I don’t understand something ... How old are you, son?
Twenty.
Why are you all gray?
Ivanov got up and went to the vestibule. He smoked in the vestibule on the lid of the dustbin, put his palms to the dusty glass, trying to see what was outside the window - there was night, impenetrable darkness, movement in the dark, - the open toilet door slammed behind him, he went into the toilet, threw a cigarette butt, glanced briefly in the mirror ... He leaned on the sink and began to study his face with calm surprise - with sharp cheekbones that sank like a dead man's cheeks, deep wrinkles ami at the corners of the mouth, feverishly shining, in a painful blue eyes.
When he returned to his compartment, the neighbors were asleep. He climbed onto the top bunk and lay down on top of the blanket, his hands behind his head.
Demobilized people were walking behind a thin partition, glasses were clinking there, a detuned guitar was strumming.
And I say: wash the ceiling with soap and report! So I say: with soap and report ...
No, listen, but we have ...
Deadline, I say, twenty minutes - the time has gone!
Listen, a young man comes to us with a "float" ...
Wow! Ceiling! Ha ha ha!
Well, listen guys! With a "float", after the institute comes a young ...
And I say: you, green salabon, are you still going to swing the rights?
Ha ha ha! Soap ceiling!
Ivanov jumped off the shelf and stepped into the next compartment. Four steamed dembiles crowded around the table, closer to the aisle sat two schoolgirls, ruddy from half a glass of port wine, goggling enthusiastic eyes. A broad-shouldered guy with a tattoo under his rolled up sleeve was talking about the ceiling.
Listen! - Quietly, through his teeth said Ivanov. - At the expense of "one" - take a deep breath. On the count of "two" - shut up!
What you said?
You heard what I said. I wouldn’t yell at every corner that the bastard - maybe they won’t notice!
What is it, he fell off the bolt?
Guys, wait, guys, - the bespectacled man fussed, who started everything about the young man with the “float”. We are really loud.
No, you heard - he's a scumbag? - the guy with the tattoo tried to get up.
True, let's be quiet, guys, - the bespectacled man yearned. - From the train to the commandant's office ...
Ivanov was waiting for the one with the tattoo to get out from behind the table in order to dump him at the feet of the others. The girls were very disturbing, out of the corner of his eye he saw their frightened faces.
Everything is fine, fellow countryman, we are quiet, - the bespectacled man, splashing over the edge, hastily poured a glass and handed it to Ivanov.
He grabbed it to splash in the face. He put it on the table, returned to his room and lay down, turning to the wall. Behind the partition muttered in a low voice:
What did he get upset about? Mad, right?
Let's go, Tanya.
Where are you girls. It's too early.
No, we'll go, thanks.
The whole buzz is broken.
Why were you holding me? Would have broken in, and calmed down.
Yes, well, him. Have you seen his eyes? Exactly - shifted ...
Ivanov tossed and turned, knocking over the blanket, toiled, floated in the hot, stifling air. I could not stand it, again took out a crumpled pack of "Astra", went to smoke. In the vestibule were demobilized - all four. They turned around at once, froze, apparently expecting him to retreat or begin to explain himself, but Ivanov silently squeezed his way to the window, lit a cigarette, looking through the dusty glass at the four behind him. They were whispering from behind, the bespectacled man was desperately waving his hand: come on, don't get involved.
Hey, fellow countryman, - called the broad-shouldered.
Ivanov turned sharply, resting his eyes on him with a cold, heavy look. There was a pause for a moment, a silent scene - one word, and a fight would have begun.
Okay, live for now, - the broad-shouldered man muttered, threw away his cigarette and went into the car. The rest followed.
Ivanov pulled down the window, exposed his face to the cold, dense wind.
And again he lay with his head buried in the pillow, his head in his hands. The car swayed, as if walking along an embankment ...
... steps were approaching, someone scratched at the door.
Who's there? - joyfully sang the mother. She glanced quickly in the mirror, adjusted her new elegant dress.
It's me - a terrible wolf!
Olezhka, a plump-cheeked boy with a small gray strand in a forelock, stared frightened at the door.
I'm going! I came! - the door swung open, a man in a cardboard wolf mask growled and moved towards Olezhka, holding out his hands with twisted fingers.
Olezhka, numb with horror, pressed his back against the wall.
Alla, the older sister, pushed the peasant away, shielding her brother with her back.
Well, that's enough, that's enough ... - the mother said with an indecisive smile.
The man chuckled under the mask.
A healthy kid is afraid of a wolf! Let him grow up as a man! Woo! He held out his hands again. Olezhka closed his eyes, desperately fighting off the paws of the wolves...
... the conductor shook him by the shoulder for the last time:
Sleep at home, soldier!
They were already standing in the aisle with their suitcases, outside the window in the gray morning light houses were floating.
Ivanov stepped onto the platform and moved in the crowd towards the station, giving way to porters with rumbling iron carts.
He walked at random along the Arbat lanes, which were not yet awake, gray and not crowded. At the entrances, with two wheels on the sidewalk, stood a line of cars. Breathing noisily, a wiry old man in red sports shorts and a cap with a long visor ran past.
Ivanov rang for a long time at the door in the old dark staircase with steep spans. Finally, light footsteps were heard in the apartment.
Who's there?
The door slightly opened on a chain, Alla stood barefoot, holding a dressing gown on her chest.
You don't know, do you?
Olezhka! You?
Can you login?
Returned! - Alla opened the door, grabbed him by the neck. Why didn't you send a telegram?